ATTEMPT 3 TITLE SEQUENCE CHANGED NEWS

ESTATE NEW SONG VERSION

JUST NEW SONG ADDED NEEDS NEW SHOTS AND IMPROVE TITLES ALL CALMING DOWN THE SONG AT THE END







From my first attempt of editing my title sequence. I have shortened the off screen diegetic sound as it was too long i have changed my main song to a more of street style song composed by someone in the music as group. i feel there is a few more changes such as slowing the sound down at the end of the title sequence.

TITLE SEQUENCE ATTEMPT 1

As my first attempt i feel it went well . There is a few changes such as the off screen sound being too long, i feel i may need to re shoot for certain parts of the title sequence i have know characters in my sequence. So i may film some and bring them in to my sequence. the main song works but not showing what i need so i will be looking for a new song choice and have some credits to the blank screen as people begin to loose interest or dont know if the title sequence works. So i am going to add the director credit in the blank section to make it clear that its a blank screen.

This is my film poster i created this to give me and my examiner a better idea of what my film could look like productively and realisticly this is the reason i have made one.

MY OPINION AND THOUGHTS

AS I HAVE WORKED ON MY OWN I FEEL I HAVE ACHIEVED AND WORKED WELL THERE ARE THINGS THAT COULD BE IMPROVED TO MAKE IT MORE BETTER. I FEEL IT WOULD OF BEEN BETTER WITH IT INTRODUCTION OF SOME CHARACTERS. BUT AS I WAS WORKING ON MY OWN AND COULD NOT GET NO ONE TO ACT I WENT FOR A TITLE SEQUENCE WHICH SHOWED THE BACKGROUND AND SETTING OF MY FILM TO GET THE AUDIENCE TO SEE THE AREA OF WHERE MY YOUNG CHARACTER IS FIGHTING TO GET AWAY FROM AND LEAVE BEHIND HIM.

SONG CHOICE AND WHY

I had originally chose track 2 of the old school beats. Because it sounded effective when playing it to my movie but didn't suit my genre i was creating. And id was purchased from itunes.I was looking for something in the style of kidulthood and adulthood so i got a composed pieced by someone in the school doing music. It seem to make the title sequence more street giving that effect i need.

MAIN CAST

CHARLIE LISTON AS DOMINIC TAYLOR









TAMAR HASSAN AS BIG BOSS





















WILLIAM RUANE AS TYRONE



















SID KARNE AS JAY

















JACK O'CONNELL AS STEVE KING

















BEN DREW AS DANNY OLIVE



















TONY MASSIAH AS LEEBOY